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So hard a prose...yes....this is the way you are.......again a nice work....! ! Excellent! ! !

Tender ideas encapsulated in strong words.........Glorifies truth & innocence! !

Hello Doc, That needs a lot of visit to my personal dictionary, I am unfazed with all your blaze. All what I am left is to praise. Your critical appraisal will help me become a better poet.. regards, Azhar

nice try to make a poem so magificent, it's just that some parts don't make much sense to me

Hi.A GREat poem embedding things of concern, some words arent easy to me to comprehend.RHYming and much expressive.I most like d about it these lines they r amazing yet eternity seals on its skin in ages and eons perfection never meander being befuddled on truth dissipates illusion from miffed up mystery love of innocence reels up in transcendence

An intriguing poem about transcendence and virtue. Too abstract for my taste, but interesting... I feel that the highest art involves showing the transcendent and beautiful in the everyday events of our manifest universe. The extraordinary is to be seen in the ordinary. But that's just my view. Thanks for the invitation, Subhendu. Your work has freshness and originality, even though I think it should be more grounded. Let me know if there are other poems in particular that you'd like me to read. If time permits, please read any of these: 1. Beyond Loneliness 2. Communion With Pain 3. First Snowfall 4. God and Loneliness 5. The More and Emptiness 6. October Panther 7. You Gave Me Back To Myself 8. You Sit, Face Averted 9. Myth of Muslim Extremists in Jim Fractured

now that took my breath away to feel it as you read it 10 from me.... graham

i have these kinds of understanding of the poem hidden between the word play! as a writer when you dance with the words only you can flow with them. as a reader i can never connect to ur truth but pick and choice what speaks to me i.e truth dissipates illusion from miffed up mystery xxxx