! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1***eternity On Milieu***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar
! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1***eternity On Milieu***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
gleams impregnable of fortress by heaven
yet glimmer through wings of immortality
as time and space in its mute undertone
smack of golden dusts raving over rays
distinction loses grace sucked in sweetness
green never ruffles insisting upon precision
yet eternity seals on its skin in ages and eons
perfection never meander being befuddled on window
as red simulates oblong on buoyant path of warmth
passion sates by beauty unflinching yet unfazed
truth dissipates illusion from miffed up mystery
crystals of transcendence beckon to glory of heaven
trust inflammable glows over dazzles of resplendence
as hued blue somersaults into thrills of ocean
dappled spumes resolute to hem in vale of tunes
love assimilates on the Elysian bay in unison
as when flattered on the altar of endearment
dream seems to redeems on virile pages of history
true soul bedecks of resilience by throes of breath
as ripples flow in solitude by buoyancy of intonation
yet mellifluous melody intones in assonance
beating of moment reels through speckles of red
beauty of truth blazes glory of Promethean fire
belief slowly beatifies in streams of penitence
love of innocence reels up in transcendence
Poetry for the intellect in Miltonic style. It might be milieu for the intellect but the living reality for the realized who have tasted it but can't describe its taste. The poem attains superb poetic heights. Thank you very much foy sharing it. I really enjoyed its ambiance. CP
The 'Milieu' you have approached transcends the simple mind of a common human being, dear Dr subhendu kar. Personally, I think it conveys a spiritual melody characterized by concerns about values like truth, trust, love, which I found delightful (but unable to put like you did...) Best regards, Maria
A very spiritual journey through an odesius'ian' transcendent observation that show's glimmers of hope for humankind. Natural progression to your style leave's any ego in the foreground and shows free style at its best....Cool write! ! Regards Andy(: :
This poem has deepness. The flavor of beauty is mingled with knowledge of expression. I appreciate the last two lines as more than simple words. 'belief slowly beatifies in streams of penitence love of innocence reels up in transcendence' The greatest sweetness of life is that which is eternal. The Lord Creator, who gave his son's life for our sake, honors belief with true repentance and innocence he does not despise. These words bring glory to him.
The speaker seems to emphasise on the beauty of the sunlight across the sky. It is beautifully written.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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11/14/2025 6:05:25 PM # 1.0.0
Wow...it's amazing how you can express your self so well. I myself would have just said something simple like the sky is blue and the stars are beautiful. But you are something else. Thank you for sharing :)