1 Elizabeth's Mind. (A Chidrens Poem) Comments
Elizabeth papers the walls of her mind
With cartoon characters of various kinds
Believe me, I tell you, there isn't much space
There's colour and laughter all over the place
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Bryan, what is a " Chidren's Poem" ? ha ha It's happened to me (typos) . line 5 prone rhymes well with own, but i think it impossible to stand prone ;) favorite lines so far: And if you need an ice cream you just have to wish And there it is, served in an edible dish Except as I've noted, this is a FANTASTIC fantasy. great rhyming, and IN ELIZABETH'S MIND, maybe 'characters' can 'stand prone'? to MyPoemList, to share. bri(an) :)
What a wonderful poem! Who would have thought a pyramid of sheep could provide such inspiration.
A wonderful imaginative write So beautifully crafted with compelling imagery .10+
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and...The Queen's mind? i'm going to send you a copy of my poem: When The Carousel Animals Got Loose.....[long; Humor; Fantasy; Adventure] Poem by Bri Edwards I hope you like it; it is long but you needn't read nor comment. bri :) Your poem reminded me of it.