Thursday, August 28, 2008

1. Blinded Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've seen the brightness fade from your eyes
The sights they should have seen
I can't believe you weren't seeing
Yet I believed
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Casual Diamond
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Original Unknown Girl 13 March 2009

This is wonderful. The final line is blinding indeed (no pun intended) . Love it. HG: -) xx

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