Friday, March 21, 2008

1. Bless Me, I Am All Yours…. [appeal To Countrymen] Comments

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A new cell excited to breathe
Full of passion, emotions, needs,
Fill the womb with new hopes
The maternal affection Adrenal supports.
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Shania K. Younce 28 March 2014

I don't support nor condone abortion in any way, shape, or form. This poem has a nice flow. Bien!

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 03 February 2013

What’s abortion? To shift the blame. Yesterday cluster, today society manages it. I’m writing from a country that would give up its Constitution rather than its free abortion – Welfare pays it. Sense of guilt disperses itself in duty’s practice: i.e. one is poor and so commits abortion, the guilt is social ‘cause if one wasn’t poor…. Mrs. Sharma is completely right.

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Kannan G 24 March 2010

May the passionate and poignant plea embedded in your composition reach the ears of many of our fellowmen! Best wishes to you. I am a newcomer to this site. I would like you to know that a selection of my poems too has been posted on this site. I would request you to kindly visit the same, at your convenience, and give me your valuable comments on some of them.

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Shiza Khan 08 June 2009

Abha this one is so full of emotions.. i really like it.10! It’s an Almighty’s world, not a Man’s bid. Bless your charming DAUGHTERS, a beautiful life!

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premji premji 26 September 2008

motherhood is the fulfillment of womanhood... Please read my poem 'Untitled like them' - the same subject..

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Vijay Gupta 30 May 2008

a poem with true emotions.

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Egi David Perdana 21 May 2008

I want to live in damnt, in my cleaning machine, (parody from oasis song I want to live in dream (my record machine))

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Emancipation Planz 09 May 2008

Dear Abha... this struck a chord.. I remember about 15 years back giving a speech to draw attention, after reading a United Nation report on infanticide in India... it riled then... and if I allowed it to...it would probably rile me again now..

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David Desantis 08 May 2008

unbelievably beautiful.......a terribly difficult subject that i myself have had to deal with......no easy answer, and often times the man has no say.

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Karan Baadkar 06 May 2008

... n we should all jin hands n fight for d little angels... n I wud lve to adopt a baby girl son... n I v seen during my very bad days.. onl a woman may b baby, a sister, a mother or a best fren was always there beside... N she was right wen a best fren said: Beside ever successful man there is a successful woman'.. N itz not about baby girl or b.... Gender never matters fr in d eyes of God n Nature we all r one... just human beings... Excellent poem with a moral.. Keep writing n sharing poems as such as d world right nw needs such writes.. Best wishes, Karan

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Ramesh T A 05 May 2008

Reality bites! It is a matter for all to think and make humanity prevail over the matter.

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C. P. Sharma 04 May 2008

Abha, Your poetic appeal is great. You are working for a noble cause. Very few peopler take up th cudgels against such causes. You are right we should react as a group to enlighten the people and stop this heinous social crime. I am preparing for a post on this theme by tomorrow.

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Rema Prasanna 01 May 2008

Abha, this one is great, a strong poem with a message to society. It touches the heart

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Subbaraman N V 23 April 2008

A great write with a deep message to the nasty society Kindly refer to my poems 'Let her sleep' and 'Let him sleep' in the PH.

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Harry Couchon Jr 21 April 2008

Abha another tear raising piece. Being a father of a child who passed away, I could sympathize with women who have lost lost a child either through abortion, disease or any other cause of death unfortunately in todays world a childs life is often at the bottom of the list of priorities

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Barbara Bizarro 20 April 2008

Again, unbelievably unexpected. Fantastic. Thank you for sharing.

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its a very thought provoking poem..it just gets those fearfull chills into me...and 'realisation' i have really got after reading ur poem...the message is very clear...and as i said there is no better way to convey 'eye opening' messages as such other than strong words...like they are in your poem...keep it up...awsome indeed..and its inspiring me to write something similar...so may be we can do this together....

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Kristy Artmann 17 April 2008

I support your cause; a unborn child is a life indeed never given the chance to breath outside the mother's body. ~Kristy~

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Vidi Writes 17 April 2008

To be more specific on the matter Lets admit, females are mainly in this chapter Allowing this hateful slaughter. Much has to be written about their antagonism The same gender cursing the same - Sadism Lets lighten the lamp on these trendy ‘isms’ Else this inclination towards massacre cannot be stopped. Thought provoking poem. Nice one.

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Srinidhi Lakhanigam 17 April 2008

A very touching poem... Gives the message so open To save the lives of millions of girls

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