Friday, July 20, 2007

(1) Before The Music Ends Comments

Rating: 3.6

Words paint a fragile picture of the dusk.
I think them to a poet far away.
The light shines dim upon my windowpane.
A few tears fall like blue rain in the mind.
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Sandra Fowler
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John Abel 14 December 2024

Wow such an amazing write up... where are you from

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M. Asim Nehal 14 May 2023

Awesome poem: Our time has been short listed by sunset, No matter that the weather has its way, The stresses live within their measurement, And distance is a gift we give ourselves.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 October 2022

I can comprehend the depth of this poem from its last line. A brilliant poem Sandra. Top score and to my favourite! !

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Bharati Nayak 14 January 2021

6This moment is designed to be as spare And elegant as winter's old, gnarled trees. I trust you to translate my whispers, Friend And send them back before the music ends.-----So deep and so beautiful poem --a sure 5 star poem.

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Laurie Hill 11 September 2018

Love this, it is beautifully written and conjures up many beautiful images Laurie Hill

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Susan Lacovara 15 November 2013

A delicious write, that leaves my pallet with a most pleasant aftertaste. Bravo. Brilliant. PEACE

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Ken E Hall 14 October 2011

trust you to translate my whispers, Friend And send them back before the music ends. Never let the music of this poem end a sit whispers thru the trees...a poem of thought thru this great mind words from Sandra...regards

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Michael Brock 07 April 2010

I have read this several times now, and each time find within something touching thank you michael

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John Oconnell 22 February 2010

there is too much that to a poet is far away and at the same time terribly close. thanks! john

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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 28 January 2010

Tears fall like blue rains in the mind... I have heard such beautiful lines rarely in any modern poet.. Soft and tender emotions expressed in the poem ever romantic

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Diane Violet 28 October 2009

Beautiful Sandra, beautiful words! I'm in awe!

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Anand Madhukar 13 October 2009

Elegant metaphors, a cascade like flow and the authenticity of emotions make this poem a delight to read.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 13 September 2009

I love gnarled trees. I love your poem.

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Lillian Thomas 11 September 2009

I love the rhythmic flow, the half rhymes that make this poem echo in my heart. Beautiful. thank you, Sandra, for sharing it with us, another in my favorites

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Patrick A. Martin 09 September 2009

You have such a rare gift and that is your ability to share such a rare gift. As always Paddy

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tom mc quade 25 August 2009

your impossibly fluid sandra...always taking care enough that your poem has enough air within it as so the words breath easily..there is always this unforced naturalness..a ease..a casualness about them..reaching into speech that does not require translation....in warmest regards in continuous admiration :) tom

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Nikunj Sharma 17 August 2009

through the windopane in the fading distance I hear an echo and see my words dance they are the whispers, that I sent you way that day..... you morphed them, in the end before the end...you are truly a friend........ Nice poem sandra

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kgnti dkritjgmdlo 08 August 2009

Dearest Sandra, You inspire me to be a better poet because within reading you I have learned so much about the craft of writing.

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C. P. Sharma 26 July 2009

Dear Sandra, In the background of this sad sweet song Going deep down the marrow I can hear Wisperings of the soul's joy of immortality To be bondage free to dance with eternity. CP

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Wiskey Pete 23 July 2009

And when the music ends...your words will sing to all forever more. They shall bring love, joy and peace to all who read them. You are so very talented and your words so thought provaking and touching. Somehow the goodness within you shines through your work. You are a quality human being and I so enjoy reading your work. It seems when I have spent some time with you, I always leave with a peaceful and contented feeling. I do not write myself, however I spend a good deal of quality time searching for poets like yourself. Good health, God Bless.

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