(1) Another Dawn - A Vignette Comments

Very nice poem. Enjoyed it very much. Take a look at Athul and Akhil who are young poets. But their poems are super.

Brief but power packed with imagery

I am looking at your beautiful Eastern dawn. You are a superb word artist. Write on, my poet friend, Warmest regards, Sandra

The image is superb (particularly 'the dawn strolled in') , but the last line is superfluous (in my humble opinion) . You write very well. love, Allie xxxx