1- Am Being Killed By Love Comments

‘…Love killing me to transform 'dust into pure gold'….’ True Love has to win the litmus test for a neutral pH. Indeed when Love is achieved [I say perfect Ten of gymnastic may seem bizarre! ] then it is pure gold. Enjoyed very much. Ten Dr. sakti

Marvelous. Remarkable. Fantastic. Wonderful. Awesome.

Love Gibran! Expressive piece :)

perfect piece...a gem...moving piece... joy and pain merging feelings and great passion poured out... the fact that you have created about this very amazing lines'transform 'dust into pure gold'. love can do magic.... i too..don't really know if love can kill..but love can do everything.... ...if a story crafted into a great and wonderful poetry...it must be from Sarwar... looking forward to new....excellent piece... again.. 10+++++++++++++ and my vote...

OMG... LOVE AND THE PAIN IT GIVES... EXPRESSED SO BFULLY...

again...are you insulting me or what? ? ' it really good! thanks for the info! ! ! i really appreciated that! ! but, reading your poem, i cant decided whether love is good or not...

what a poemmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm i don't really know how you've write it but i do know that you're talented

nice write...impressive references of great giants of poetry....khalil rumi..well done indeed.

Do not know how to admire this poem? Khalil Gibran, Rumi and Sarwar in one! Very nice poem indeed. My prefect 10 for you.

A Very Beautiful Poem There! Very Pure And It Touched My Heart. Keep On The Great Job. Nice One! =D -Cassandra.

nice thoughts string in a pearl of wisdom.

that iz amazing it really iz wow

A very romantic poem. The last line is amazing Love transforming dust into gold. You get 10++

i really like the poem it brings out the comprxity of love. it is a 10 defnitly.

love..hmmm.... I love the phrase 'changing dust to pure gold'... over all...its a great poem... :)

from the prologue on the first line, , a sudden upbeat mood starts with love theme, , i like the 'very' free style of this write, ,10

Love is a wonderful thing but it can sometimes be rough as well. Great poem. : : Vanessa: :

on there heart toughness has passed whosoever named the love nothing but pain and punishment....a very great write sir....thanks 10

all i can say is WOW! ! ! ! ! !

hmmm interesting read.......hmmm love should give not kill......