1-A Story Of The Deer's Musk Comments

Dear Sc, Depicts nicely the search for ones self the inner/soul....... the beauty and fragrance exist in one but to realize it is the venture.... rgrds/salu

quite insightful! an interesting read.! :)

very very nice indeed

Nice spiritual thoughts. Sant Kabirdas wrote the following two lines around 1450; 'Kasthuri Kundali Basai, Mriga doondai vanamaahi Aisi khadi khadi Ram hai, Dunia Dekhai naahi.' It is identical to your writing.

very nice poem, if only we realize the greatness in us we need not go round mad searching for it from somewhere outside

this piece was also very nice keep it up

People have understood this deer is rather human. Pungent smell...of mystery. It has to do with something sacred. It is the call of sensuality.

a very good one i may say, il liked these two parts.(of coures i liked it all) .'..Ah deer! Oh dear! ' and 'That's why you are a lover of the true incense The truth within you the Musk- the true essence'.

Sorry for repeating this but, it was very spiritual and i loved it. I acutaly sang it because it felt like a story/song with alot of words with heavy meanings. I rate it, a 10 =)

very good with words n looks like very qualifeied can read ur passion for literature and really nice

lovely spiritual thought. The musk within.

What a way of describing the chase of love and how we look for it mainly in the wrong places. Thank you for sharing this with me!

A very good poem: -) keep up the good work and thank you for sharing

A very good poem with a lot of food for thought. Ron

Since the title is general, the explanation at the end focuses the reader at gives to him the poems purpose. This is good because clarity of purpose makes reading and understanding clear. The search for such Musk may take you to bad places. The wisdom of all things begins with self-wisdom. Without that, truth is elusive. A knowledge that each deer must acquire. GW62

Insightful write sarwar...10 Rema

nightingale's skin has musky odour whenever red rose dances in the wind...10

this is so beautiful. we search for God ever where, but little realise we have Him in the island with in. you have made an unusual analogy, so beautifuuly. Sarwar 10

happa! 1..............superb............all d best.............nice creation.............

truth is truely not an easy task, but nevertheless we must all follow it utterly or at least i pray, but eyes deserve the tears of our pleasures and reading this helps me to reflect about how i want to sit again as i once did and be glad i could dream if only for a short time, filled with knowing, thanks