(1) A Hymn To Our Beginnings Comments

Hi Leon, You are a seasoned poet indeed, a very nice and rich poem Just discovered this website today, and thanks for your encouraging comment on my poem, that is the first one i have composed, and hope to compose more. Ride on brother, and take care! !

Attractive alliteration is scattered throughout this fascinating piece with its thoroughly awesome images. Dynamic and spiritually powerful. love, Allie xxxx

only you can tame wild words into submission...10and a half..

aren't there toomany hard sounding words coming in way of conveying such delicate experience and sensitive emotion?