Friday, November 25, 2005

1. A House Upon The Height Comments

Rating: 1.8

an abandoned house
saps the spirit with its
nagging and chilling
emptiness, a black hole
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john tiong chunghoo
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Callie Carroll 10 August 2008

Excellent! Thank you for including your source of inspiration; I too use this technique (reading is my fuel) . What a perfect way to describe the way a decrepit house captures us, 'saps the spirit with its nagging and chilling emptiness.' You communicate perfectly the despair.

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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