Tuesday, January 20, 2009

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A new day is dawning; the winds of change are in the air
All our burdens have been lifted… Our lives are without care?
Our country is a team; that's made up of you and I
We can't put it on one man, just to simplify
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Rhonda Baker
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Rhonda Riddle 06 February 2009

Hi! I would love to see this poem on the cover of Time or Newsweek magazine. It's a small poem with a large and to-the-point message. Great work! :)

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Eddie Roa 23 January 2009

Even if we see a hero emerging with bright prospects in the horizon we should not be impatient for redemption. well written.

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Ted Sheridan 21 January 2009

We are in a hole and someone needs to shoulder the other so they can climb out of it. Great message with this write.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 21 January 2009

Profound...hand in hand together a better world full of peace and love, amen

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