1/2 And 1/2 Nots Poem by Savita Tyagi

1/2 And 1/2 Nots

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Reading my poem 'Nobody and Somebody'
Bri suggested that I write about 1/2 and 1/2 nots
Of course he probably was kidding!
But it inspired me to twist the numeric a bit.

It has been the dream of mankind to
Close the gap between the 1/2 and 1/2 nots
To create a homogeneous society.
Sadly this wholesome dream floats in a world of fake
Having no real consequence at stake.

Some say this world is also an illusion
But not like that inner world of absurd cohesion.
In dream world the 1/2 nots may be sitting in a palace,
But here I find them sitting on footpaths
Waging a bitter battle of want and agony,
Aghast by onlooker's disdain and fate's irony.

Many would consider them a burden.
Some would sympathize to shed some tears
But not enough to share their precious 1/2s.
Very few would think of making the human life
Whole by sharing their 'haves' with 'have nots'.

Two negatives do create a positive in math.
But in real world 1/2 nots may aspire to have
An enchanting dream of wholeness with their counter half
Or they just might cancel each other out
To create an awful life of zero balance.
And this I write without having
Much of a math knowledge!

Monday, December 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: reflection,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by Bri's comment on my poem 'Nobody And Somebody'.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Mclain 12 December 2016

Many read what you write, They just all don't leave a comment. If I had to survive by comments, I'd have starved, a long time ago.. iip Just keep on keeping on 👣👣

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Savita Tyagi 09 March 2017

Thanks Is it poetry. Forget the comments I am just trying to survive the writing. It doesn't come easy when memory starts to slip. Thanks for the assurance that many read what I write. So thankful to all my readers.

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Bri Edwards 11 May 2023

I think the above is the best writing I've read from my friend James Mclain. ;) 'at a boy, James. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 12 October 2024

James, formerly 'Is It Poetry' on PH, has, it seems, had a serious life/mind change in the last few years, making his poetry and use of English 'much better'. Maybe now he earns tons of money with his poetry? ? ;)) bri

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Bri Edwards 12 October 2024

(cont.) Strangely (to me) , my wife says she watched an elderly woman, in a CA downtown. retrieving recyclable containers from a trash bin and gave her a 50 dollar bill because my wife had no smaller bills with her.

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Bri Edwards 12 October 2024

[[ PH will erase a comment and you will lose it if you haven't copied it before sending, IF you use a dollar SIGN instead of the word 'dollar'. PH does not give any warning! ! bri : ( (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 12 October 2024

In this marriage my wife is apt to have some 50 and 100 dollar bills on hand, while I RARELY do. She has discouraged my tendency to be financially charitable, through the mail or on a sidewalk. (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 12 October 2024

In this marriage my wife has discouraged/mildly protested my tendency to share a little money with individuals and organizations. (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 12 October 2024

Savita, Perhaps I've arrived at Zero Balance? But, actually, I've always HAD quite enough, thank you very much. I've never been rich nor poor nor close to either for myself.

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Savita Tyagi 19 October 2024

Thank you Bri for all your comments. May be the gap between 'have and have nots' would always be an unfulfilled dream. Life has a tendency to create its own zero balance for us. All we can remember is what we did for others and for ourselves. Just like what your wife did.

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