Tuesday, January 17, 2012

1,2,3,4,5,6, Be Function Of Love Comments

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be function of love!
when love is one..
you must be four,
when love is two..
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ahmed khaled
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Adeline Foster 05 February 2014

Interesting structure to this poem. Looks like fun. Read mine –An Acutely Obtuse Pythagorean Lyric – Adeline

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Hans Vr 20 January 2012

Love is all encompassing. So nicely and poetically expressed here

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Rajendran Muthiah 17 January 2012

A sharp thinking mixes with elevating sense of poesy. Appeals to the intellect. Fantastic.

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Jacqui Broad 17 January 2012

The function of love is to free our minds and be as God planned it. To have emotions and feelings. Love and being loved is the nearest we can get to heaven whilst still on earth. A great poem!

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Dave Walker 17 January 2012

The function of love, is there, in your great poem. A fantastic poem my friend.

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Vipins Puthooran 17 January 2012

the function of love is, to be in love with love/////// a beautiful poem! ! !

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Sylvia Carter 17 January 2012

Wow thanks for sharing this with me Love is very, very powerful and more than just an emotion and is not just limited to our part of the world. I think Love is timelessness and limitless God is the EPITOME of Real LOVE and our example.

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Eric Cockrell 17 January 2012

'the function of love...', very well said!

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