Saturday, April 25, 2009

1,2,3,4... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everyone thinks she's happy.
But she finds herself crying when she's in her room.
Tears fall one by one running down her cheeks,
1,2,3,4...
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Roxy Gonro
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Stephen Magill 25 September 2009

great poem, i love the change in line length and rythm, its almost like counting, amazing write.

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Adeline Foster 24 September 2009

Roxy: Now that is a poem. How well you brought out your intent. And that numeric count is so apropos. Well done. Hope you read my Bloom Of Youth. Adeline

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Shannon Lasater 22 September 2009

i think this one is my favorite, i give this 1 a 10 also

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Sarwar Chowdhury 20 September 2009

this is finely penned dear roxy! 10+

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