Monday, October 30, 2006

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Rating: 5.0

Wet pavements
Even oil slicks.
Those dirty grey-black pains.
Have hidden things.
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Lauren Michaels
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Nathan Strange 18 December 2006

Your use of repetition is perfect, it really makes your poems, I think that you have a good understanding of the world!

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