Friday, January 2, 2009

1+1=1 Comments

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I dispute his permutation!
At least twice a day; him, I curse
and me; he often pinches and wrenches!
Well! I understand his compulsions
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Sathya Narayana
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Kesav Easwaran 04 November 2009

good write...very artfully told...10

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'Trickled down HIS words mysterious “When you become I, and I …..you” ' His [not his] excellent. And lastly that EI = 'I' Great dr. sakti 12.08.09.

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Queeny Gona 28 June 2009

Great friendship of yours! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! though with two bodies only one soul...

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Marieta Maglas 19 June 2009

This poem (my opinion) means that we need to become aware and to acquire knowledge of the part that is missing and take the possession, through knowledge, of whole..For this purpose we must know each other perfectly and we must have a convergent thinking..I'm starting to understand you. great poem...10+++ Thank you for sharing.

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Marilyn Lott 22 April 2009

You describe a deep friendship that builds over a long period of time. Very well thought out and described. A '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Vinod Kumar 20 January 2009

One plus One is equal to a little Big One, very nice rememberance, like Oneness University. thanks for sharing.10++

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Karen Palero 16 January 2009

..great metaphor...! (^_*)

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 11 January 2009

the essence of love is all about this...! ! ! wow...! ! ! awesome work... : D

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Deependra Kumar Jha 06 January 2009

Great work! agree with essence of the idea...10/10

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Blue Eyes 05 January 2009

this poem is really unique.i like it its special.

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Ken E Hall 05 January 2009

Into self poem very original-Rollercoaster romance emptyness, Essence unknown in friendship and crying out for luv as I see it- I'm sure it will prevail luv I mean good write uavaniceday regards

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Chitra - 05 January 2009

discover ourselves in someone else and yet retain our essence a novel write

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Dr Kamran Haider 04 January 2009

Wow bhayya... Its awesome... Lovely to read... Thanks for sharing, ...

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Oh My! , I love your poem and it brought to mind a poem I wrote several years ago with the same question of 1+1=1...My poem is called Love's Lament...please read when time allows...10 here for you! Oh My!

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 04 January 2009

Soulmates, beautiful....10

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Kassem Oude 03 January 2009

Roll down 107 dices with 107 faces each, then count the probabilites, am not of 'math' but I think an infinity of peole the result would be. So a man can be one with his shadow only even if people share many oulines.

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Ivor Hogg 03 January 2009

you and I can become we one entity if we trust enough

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Ency Bearis 03 January 2009

Unique and interesting poem...to become one in other person can be attributed probably by encarnation..or in one mind team work..well?

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Vaibhav Pandey 03 January 2009

sir, you have once again left me thinking. I really admire your imagination.

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