Monday, April 12, 2010

0989..... Death! Death! Death! Comments

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I don't fear Death
I don't invite Death
I wish I Taste It, But
I wish it's Peaceful
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Gan Chennai
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Luz Hanaii 04 March 2011

Very good. I too pray God grant your, my, wish and that of all those that have a loving spirit for this earth, and all living things.

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Gita Ashok 28 June 2010

Absolutely! I totally agree that every beginning has an end and every end is but a new beginning. So life and death are but two sides of a coin. Repetition of a few lines in the first and last stanzas creates a stronger impact. A good write.

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