Tuesday, March 11, 2014

098. Ok Everyone Listen Up Comments

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Ok everyone listen up
this is for all of those who have upset me
in one way or another
I am not even going to bother mentioning names
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Jaden Knight
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Neena Change 01 July 2015

Feel like you and I may have a bit in common. Enjoying your poems tonight for the first time in a while. Stay strong ;)

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Bri Edwards 26 August 2014

oops! read this one already. :) bri when are the others on ph going to listen up?

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Bri Edwards 16 May 2014

thanks for the rhyme: in that respect I‘ll take great pleasure in killing you fools at my leisure. ..................... it is a welcome interlude in the litany of rage. I’ll be sure to let my death black standard fly edged with the blood and gore of my enemies that I’ve already destroyed ..............these lines might make a good beginning to a prize-winning horror/vengeance novel. yikes! ! ! ! i'm not sure if you have a great imagination or if you have had a very, very unfortunate life at times. in any case, your writing is quite excellent and compelling. thanks for sharing. bri :)

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