Tuesday, March 11, 2014

093. I’m Sorry That I’m Ugly Comments

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I’m sorry that I’m ugly
never had a chance or a wish
to be anything else
it’s not by my choice
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Jaden Knight
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Bri Edwards 23 December 2015

ok, Profanisaurus, as one of my last actions on PH for some time, i'll see that '203. If You Do Not Love Me' gets into DECEMBER'S Section A, and that.................... '093. I'm Sorry That I'm Ugly' gets into DECEMBER'S Section C. THANKS, my good friend. i've enjoyed reading them both and others should as well. if they don't, .........we can't do anything about it, SO why worry? . bri :) p.s. i DO love you. WELL, not in THAT way! and who are you being sorry for? yourself or for the ones who have to look at you? ha ha bad joke? ? :) :) no need to be sorry for appearances. and to MyPoemList!

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Bri Edwards 05 May 2014

i'll probably comment more later. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 04 May 2014

any one, any thing, my self. P., i noticed you sometimes split words into/in to two parts (two words) which i normally would leave as single words. it works for me if it works for you, and it (for me) may help to draw my attention more to what you are saying. but i do WONDER if you (and i think a few others on PH) split the words up by habit [(that's the way you learned to write or you somehow changed how you write those words for some purpose) ] OR if you normally would NOT split up the words, but you do in your poetry. hmmmm? bri :)

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