(091) Cotton Candy Comments

Cotten candy... now thats one thing on earth i have never tried... But seeing what it did to you, i will pass and leave the being sick to you... Risha... a fun poem..10

Risha, I love cotton candy, but not with coffee. On its own its OK. I loved this little poem. David

Excellent imagry painted here Risha, I'm not sure I could stand the mix of cotton candy and coffee either. Oh oh too much cotton candy and of course the coffee didn't help.--Thanks Risha---Melvina

Wonderful poem, I felt nausea too. good word painting. Kolitha

Ha ha ha Good one. Don't you ever try the combination again

Nice poem Risha, cotton candy and coffee, yes think I'd throw up also. Now a candy apple, more to my liking. Hugs, Diane

It put a smile on my face, I could feel it melt in my mouth, The coffee combo would have gotten me too.

Serves you right for eating that sickly stuff! But as you are only 9 years old you can be forgiven. This is a nice rhyming poem, Risha. Love, Fran xx