Tuesday, May 9, 2006

(09) The Death Of A Candle Comments

Rating: 3.1

The protruded pink candle
Was so beautiful to see.
The yellow hue of its flame
Was the brightest it could be.
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Lubna S. Khan
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Kesav Easwaran 18 August 2008

a candle burning to death...martyrdom...for, losing life, it helps drive out all the nightmares around you...a dropp of tear in gratitude...aptly placed this poem has deeper meaning... human life in this world is like a candle burning out to nothing imparting light to those drear and near around...the word pink adds to the sincerity…of the candle or unselfish life...good write, Lubna… i give you 10

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Abid Khan 10 July 2006

lubna, i just want to know, why candle, and why candle only inpaire you, nice very deep, backup, fiveup, xx abid

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Mahfooz Ali 05 June 2006

Dear Lubna, I read out ur poem is having a very obvious and nice Xpression. Good. Keep it up.

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Preeti - is here! 09 May 2006

NIce oen is all i can say... very well described~

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Lubna S. Khan

Lubna S. Khan

Dahanu, Maharashtra, India
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