The protruded pink candle
Was so beautiful to see.
The yellow hue of its flame
Was the brightest it could be.
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lubna, i just want to know, why candle, and why candle only inpaire you, nice very deep, backup, fiveup, xx abid
Dear Lubna, I read out ur poem is having a very obvious and nice Xpression. Good. Keep it up.
a candle burning to death...martyrdom...for, losing life, it helps drive out all the nightmares around you...a dropp of tear in gratitude...aptly placed this poem has deeper meaning... human life in this world is like a candle burning out to nothing imparting light to those drear and near around...the word pink adds to the sincerity…of the candle or unselfish life...good write, Lubna… i give you 10