(09) Haiku – Meditative State Comments

each word is replete with passions

‘…Focus Pure Attention on // Mother’s Lotus feet’ Indeed it’s great indeed 10+++ Glory unto Divinity Ms. Nivedita UK

nicely written..beautiful state....keep up the gud work...10++++: -)

Marvelous...10+

Nice haiku attempt though i was expecting a perfect 5-7-5 haiku lines. Your first one was fine having 17 syllables to count. The 2nd one was lacking of syllables or word to have a fine haiku of having 17syllables all in all. However, you made a fine meaningful theme.

Stunning 10

wow a great haiku a very good first attempt i hope u get that peace of mind and divine solace -10 anjali

solace in writing can still be quite meditating wouldn't you say? great words..amazing poem!