Friday, March 25, 2005

09 Haiku - Criss Crossing Shadows Comments

Rating: 3.5

haiku one:

in criss-crossing shadows
of the mountains, we admire
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john tiong chunghoo
COMMENTS
Colleen Courtney 29 April 2014

Chu goo writes such wonderful haiku's!

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Captain Herbert Poetry 28 April 2014

Very enthralling kind of haiku. Beautiful

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Ben Gieske 06 August 2009

I find 'tottering ballet dance' presents a very imaginative and lively picture. I prefer the first 'dead widow's bamboo bell over the second one. The tanka produces the effect that it describes. Nicely done.

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Sandra Fowler 04 August 2009

Shadows are eternally fascinating to the poetic mind. But I was most moved by the widow and her bamboo bell. That poignant sound resonates. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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