Tuesday, June 26, 2007

(086) Poor Working Stiff Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everyday the same routine,
following orders, part of a team.
Roll out of bed around four,
shower, have breakfast and out the door.
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Melvina Germain
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Andrew mark Wilkinson 28 June 2007

Ah yes so true they give you just enough to live on, knowing you have to come back monday morning and start all over again...10

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Wow Melvina this is such a Univarsal relatable piece of poetry......I know a certain famous 'poet' who recently got a huge award who could take lessons from you on making sense and on writing Great poetry that makes sense! ! ((Smile)) Excellent write that is Great to read if for nothing else other then it makes a person feel good that they are not alone in the rat race...lol Thank you for sharing Melly............10! ! =Shelley=

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Ernestine Northover 26 June 2007

Yep! Definitely a winner. What a life we lead. Very well explained in this one. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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JoAnn McGrath 26 June 2007

Moooooooooooooooo......sometimes we feel like cattle....hearding our lives away greath rhythm to this piece Mel: O)

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

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