08 Chasing Vanity Comments

Lori, Love this poem! ! Love the way you tie it all up. 'almost broke a sweat' fine work, fine work. Carolynn

This one really had me smiling Lori! I love your choice of title too.....very appropriate. Great poem. Sincerely, Mary

This is comic on so many levels, I've lost count! A terrific write, Lori, and as a fellow gym goer, all I can say is, sweat it out! ! ! Esther : ]

I find this one an excellent write Lori, it has that energy that seems so common in American writers. The pace is kept going in a long (well long isd relative, in PH terms) narrative. I like the manner in which you treat stanzas as paragraphs, whilst maintaining a tight grip on things.