Thursday, September 28, 2006

(078) Poison Seed Comments

Rating: 2.7

To make a poisonous seed
The things you will need
Are rotten cells from human blood
And things found in the mud
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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)
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Andrew mark Wilkinson 15 March 2007

A vampire and a poisoner too... Little Risha you little devil you....: -]

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Carrie Carliell 24 January 2007

Risha, Where did the inspiration for this poem come from? It was quite unique. It really caught my attention. Thanks for sharing it with me and everyone. Carrie

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Raghavan Warrier 01 December 2006

Risha, If you don't write your age as 9 and present this poem to a stranger; I am sure this poem will be interpreted in hundreds of difffernet shades of meaning. The imagery is too strong and it even tempts me to interpret it as suggestive of evil in the world. But I refrain from it.

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Asma Bahrainwala 05 November 2006

hmm...this is quite an interesting recipe! ! ... ;)) Asma...

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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