Monday, January 29, 2007

(076) Who Is The Light Comments

Rating: 3.1

Is it the stars
Shining through the night in no hurry
Is it mars
Saturn, Pluto, Venus or Mercury
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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)
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Andrew mark Wilkinson 14 March 2007

A Bright light indeed, a little indian spark... a little lady with a big heart... Risha

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David Harris 19 February 2007

Who Is The Light? A young person named Risha who has just turned nine, lives in India and brightens up our lives with her beautiful little poems. That's who the light is. Keep writing and lighting up our world we need more of you. David

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Howard Johnson 05 February 2007

I am not sure why This write had not been voted on.It was no problem giving it a ten, I like the flow of words, Great job like always, , , Risha!

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Aldo Kraas 01 February 2007

Who is the light is it the sun?

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Rajaram Ramachandran 01 February 2007

I like the last two lines It is humour Which is better than a rumour It rhymes well and also meaningful. You are a child of just 9 years, but your ideas are of a lady in her 90s.

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Aldo Kraas 29 January 2007

Nice worK Well written

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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