Sunday, March 2, 2014

076. It’s Gone Comments

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It’s gone
it’s all over
the pain is going away
soon the scars may fade
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Jaden Knight
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Bri Edwards 17 December 2015

gee, Profanisaurus, at first this sounded familiar; maybe it is similar to another of your poems. then i finished reading and looked for a comment from me. but, alas, i see none! another wonderful poem, if one enjoys reading about mishaps, mischief, and misery! ! ! to MyPoemList. maybe in a showcase some day? OR would it bring everyone's mood down too much, i wonder. hmm? i liked the few rhymes you offered also. have a spine-tingling Ringling Brothers and Barnum and Bailey Circus weekend! ! ! bri :)

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