Sunday, March 2, 2014

073. Failed Mother Comments

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Childlike whispers remind me of the past
before I knew who I was
or could even talk
the time when I was with my mother
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Jaden Knight
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Bri Edwards 28 August 2016

the whole poem is superbly-told, but i especially liked: kiss of the surgeon’s knife so, you ARE a 'survivor'! ! ! good for you, Profanisaurus. i read the one about father some time ago. bri ;) still playing 'football'? ? ? any job or girl in your life these days? ? bri ;)

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Katie Kelley 04 May 2014

I sorry it was that way, i understand though how you feel.

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Yours Forever X 02 March 2014

I'm sorry: '(I totally understand; inbox me! Emotional poem by the way.... I cried so much! I tried to stop my tears but I couldn't x

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