Tuesday, August 28, 2007

(072) Still I Love My Sister….Fiza Comments

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She always likes to annoy me
And says I am very sweet
She keeps giving me kisses
Which I don’t think is neat
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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)
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Red Blooded Black Hearted 11 September 2007

Sounts like me and my sister, we used to be just like that... Things have changed since then. We get along great... That poem was excellently written, I liked the language. Keep writing Risha: -)

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David Harris 04 September 2007

Risha, what a wonderful poem about your sister. I know my sister was the apple of my parents eye. But does it really matter, most certainly not. So long as you love your sister, that is all that really counts and from this poem we can see you certainly do that. Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us little Princess. David

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Diane Violet 29 August 2007

Ah Risha, wonderful poem about you and your sister! Brings back memories of my childhood with my younger sister...I swear she had mom and dad wrapped around her little finger. :) Love and hugs, Diane

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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