Friday, November 3, 2017

ଖୋଜିବା ର ସେଇ କେତେ ଦିନ- 07(Khojiba Ra Sei Kete Dina/Odia Poem-07) Comments

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 November 2017

Promises are given to search love and see reflection in eyes. But life is uncertain and this body is destructible. Memory keeps love under calmness of moon. Body and mind still unite. An amazing love poem is wisely penned...10

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 05 November 2017

Thank you my dear revered Sir for your inspiring words.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 08 November 2017

ତମ କୁ ଖୋଜିବା ବେଳେ ସ୍ତବ୍ଧ ମୋର ତିନି କାଳ, ସ୍ମୃତି ଆଉ ବିସ୍ମୃତି ର ଷଡ ଋତୁ, ଚଉଦ ଭୂବନ ତୁମ ବାସ୍ନା ଭିଜା ଏଇ ଦେହ ମନ ପ୍ରାଣ।।। A beautiful sharing of so nicely crafted a poem. I agree with you Sir.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 03 November 2017

A fragrance of lost dreams return to the bed of desire wet with moonshines of the past moments as a promise of a spring. 10++++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 08 November 2017

ତମ କୁ ଖୋଜିବା ବେଳେ ସ୍ତବ୍ଧ ମୋର ତିନି କାଳ, ସ୍ମୃତି ଆଉ ବିସ୍ମୃତି ର ଷଡ ଋତୁ, ଚଉଦ ଭୂବନ ତୁମ ବାସ୍ନା ଭିଜା ଏଇ ଦେହ ମନ ପ୍ରାଣ।।। A beautiful sharing of so nicely crafted a poem. I agree Sanjukta Didi..

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Alina Kaikeyi 03 November 2017

ସଜ ସଜ ରମଣ ବାସନା- ଆଉ ଥରେ ଲେଉଟିବ ବୋଲି ପ୍ରତିଶ୍ରୁତି ଦିଏ ।। A lyrical presence of the beloved is often heard from beyond the mundane landscapes, the heart beats and sings a new tune, to the music of unheard songs. A fragrance of lost dreams return to the bed of desire wet with moonshines of the past moments as a promise of a spring. Great thought shared. 10++++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 08 November 2017

ତମ କୁ ଖୋଜିବା ବେଳେ ସ୍ତବ୍ଧ ମୋର ତିନି କାଳ, ସ୍ମୃତି ଆଉ ବିସ୍ମୃତି ର ଷଡ ଋତୁ, ଚଉଦ ଭୂବନ ତୁମ ବାସ୍ନା ଭିଜା ଏଇ ଦେହ ମନ ପ୍ରାଣ।।। A beautiful sharing of so nicely crafted a poem. I agree with you Alina.

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D Priyanka Singh 03 November 2017

ଗଲା ରାତି ଜହ୍ନ ଆଲୁଅ ରେ ଭିଜି ଥିବା- ସଜ ସଜ ରମଣ ବାସନା- ଆଉ ଥରେ ଲେଉଟିବ ବୋଲି ପ୍ରତିଶ୍ରୁତି ଦିଏ ।। Lovely poem shared. 10+++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 08 November 2017

ତମ କୁ ଖୋଜିବା ବେଳେ ସ୍ତବ୍ଧ ମୋର ତିନି କାଳ, ସ୍ମୃତି ଆଉ ବିସ୍ମୃତି ର ଷଡ ଋତୁ, ଚଉଦ ଭୂବନ ତୁମ ବାସ୍ନା ଭିଜା ଏଇ ଦେହ ମନ ପ୍ରାଣ।।। A beautiful sharing of so nicely crafted a poem. I agree with you Priyanka.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 03 November 2017

ଗଲା ରାତି ଜହ୍ନ ଆଲୁଅ ରେ ଭିଜି ଥିବା- ସଜ ସଜ ରମଣ ବାସନା- ଆଉ ଥରେ ଲେଉଟିବ ବୋଲି ପ୍ରତିଶ୍ରୁତି ଦିଏ ।। Lovely poem shared in such a nice way. 10+++

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