When you see a silver lining in the sky
just look for the dark cloud
that it encircles, ready to break
into a thunderous shower.
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Thank you. It gives me pleasure to see that you enjoyed the poem
Lovely poem with vivid imagery. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for this masterful creation, my friend. Remain enriched.
It gives me immense pleasure to receive such great comments from you, poet Mr Dike
A beautiful poem adorned with superb imagery and stunning poetic expressions. The closure lines are very inspiring. Top marks!
I am happy to read your words of appreciation. Obliged.
A cloud in the silver lining surely deserves top marks and to my favourite
Thank you Geeta! For the good words, for the 5*s and for adding the poem to your favourite poem. I feel doubly honoured
Loved it dear Poet Unnikrishnan. Wishing you and your family a happy and healthy New Year.
'A rainbow of tears hidden behind a gusto of tears' Marvellous poetic expression that brings forth images of wondrous nature.
Poet LeeAnn has added this poem to her favourites. Thank You for your good words
......hidden behind a gust of tears.....excellent write....thank u, dear poet...
" Amber Piercy has added this poem to her favourites". Thank You,
Wow, loved this poem! So often one who smiles is hiding their tears, brilliant poem with great imagery.
I is a pleasure to read your comments on the poem, dear poet. So very grateful
This is more than just a poem... more than just a cloud.. this is a rainbow in a storm. thank you.
I am so very happy that you have enjoyed the poem. Thank You
A beautiful image and such metaphors and anthropomorphic use, Wonderful.
'As a poet cries'. An extremely beautiful and sensitive, poetic paisaje, deeply poetic, movingly tender and unforgettable.
I enjoyed reading this poem yet again! I was taken up by your playing with the silver lining and that dark storm cloud coming---you have a unique vision--thank you for sharing it with us
My profound gratitude to Aarzoo and Lyn Paul for going through the poem and favouring me with their observations on it. Obliged
After load-shedding/ The cloud is with a rainbow/ Having a dimple!
Thank you, Pallab. Sorry that I am late for noting your comments
I relate to this beautiful poem. So inspiring and thought provoking
My gratitude to you you, Aarzoo. Your words are always inspiring
Beautifully penned poem. I loved the closing stanza. Inspiring!
Thank you, Rajitha. From the bottom of my hearts