Wednesday, May 3, 2017

07 A Cloud In The Silver Lining Comments

Rating: 5.0

When you see a silver lining in the sky
just look for the dark cloud
that it encircles, ready to break
into a thunderous shower.
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Rajitha K.S. Ayyappan 10 November 2024

Beautifully penned poem. I loved the closing stanza. Inspiring!

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Thank you, Rajitha. From the bottom of my hearts

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C. Muralidara Kannan 17 March 2024

What a ray of hope after a showery sweep!

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Thank you dear poet. Ever grateful

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Tiana Isaac 07 July 2023

Such a beautiful poem.

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Thank you. It gives me pleasure to see that you enjoyed the poem

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Chinedu Dike 25 April 2023

Lovely poem with vivid imagery. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for this masterful creation, my friend. Remain enriched.

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It gives me immense pleasure to receive such great comments from you, poet Mr Dike

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 March 2023

A beautiful poem adorned with superb imagery and stunning poetic expressions. The closure lines are very inspiring. Top marks!

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I am happy to read your words of appreciation. Obliged.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 January 2023

A cloud in the silver lining surely deserves top marks and to my favourite

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Thank you Geeta! For the good words, for the 5*s and for adding the poem to your favourite poem. I feel doubly honoured

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 January 2023

Loved it dear Poet Unnikrishnan. Wishing you and your family a happy and healthy New Year.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 January 2023

'A rainbow of tears hidden behind a gusto of tears' Marvellous poetic expression that brings forth images of wondrous nature.

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Poet LeeAnn has added this poem to her favourites. Thank You for your good words

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Anjandev Roy 11 January 2023

......hidden behind a gust of tears.....excellent write....thank u, dear poet...

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Thank You, Anjandev for your time and kind words

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" Amber Piercy has added this poem to her favourites". Thank You,

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Marcia Schechinger 18 October 2022

Wow, loved this poem! So often one who smiles is hiding their tears, brilliant poem with great imagery.

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I is a pleasure to read your comments on the poem, dear poet. So very grateful

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Adrian Antique 13 July 2022

This is more than just a poem... more than just a cloud.. this is a rainbow in a storm. thank you.

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I am so very happy that you have enjoyed the poem. Thank You

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soren Barrett 10 March 2022

A beautiful image and such metaphors and anthropomorphic use, Wonderful.

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 March 2022

Loved the detailed comments on the poem. Thank you.

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Sandra Feldman 24 January 2022

'As a poet cries'. An extremely beautiful and sensitive, poetic paisaje, deeply poetic, movingly tender and unforgettable.

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Unnikrishnan E S 25 January 2022

Thank you, Sandra.

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Unnikrishnan E S 25 January 2022

Thank you Sandra

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Susan Williams 24 January 2022

I enjoyed reading this poem yet again! I was taken up by your playing with the silver lining and that dark storm cloud coming---you have a unique vision--thank you for sharing it with us

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Unnikrishnan E S 25 January 2022

Thank you for revisiting the poem and the beautiful comments

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Nabakishore Dash 07 January 2022

Inspiring poem with genuine imagery. Superb

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Ever grateful, Nabakishore.

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 December 2021

My profound gratitude to Aarzoo and Lyn Paul for going through the poem and favouring me with their observations on it. Obliged

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Pallab Chaudhury 11 December 2021

After load-shedding/ The cloud is with a rainbow/ Having a dimple!

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 January 2022

Thank you, Pallab. Sorry that I am late for noting your comments

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Aarzoo Mehek 10 December 2021

I relate to this beautiful poem. So inspiring and thought provoking

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My gratitude to you you, Aarzoo. Your words are always inspiring

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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