When I was child I played at the park,
I was told I had to be back by dark,
I looked at my watch it was a quarter to eight,
When the street lights came on not a mintue late,
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Love this one, Coreena! Real feeling, set out beautifully for us to share.
Classically crafted, complete with vivid imagery, natural sounding rhyme and beaming w/ youthful exuberance and a touch of wistful nostalgia. Very nice work.
nice poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Sun ♥
I like not regretting my childhood, too, even the stuff we did that wasn't so great it is fun to look back and just laugh about it and not live with regrets. Great to not take life so seriously. Good poem. Sincerely, Connie Webb