Monday, July 16, 2007

07/16/2007 Childhood - Summer Comments

Rating: 4.9

When I was child I played at the park,
I was told I had to be back by dark,
I looked at my watch it was a quarter to eight,
When the street lights came on not a mintue late,
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Coreena Dejesus
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Con Nie 22 March 2008

I like not regretting my childhood, too, even the stuff we did that wasn't so great it is fun to look back and just laugh about it and not live with regrets. Great to not take life so seriously. Good poem. Sincerely, Connie Webb

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Janice Windle 13 November 2007

Love this one, Coreena! Real feeling, set out beautifully for us to share.

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Chris Mendros 09 November 2007

Classically crafted, complete with vivid imagery, natural sounding rhyme and beaming w/ youthful exuberance and a touch of wistful nostalgia. Very nice work.

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nice poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Sun ♥

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Coreena Dejesus

Coreena Dejesus

USA (Born in MA) (Raised in MI)
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