Thursday, February 27, 2014

069. A Darkened Chamber Is What I Need Comments

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A darkened chamber is what I need
to protect me from the vultures
that I see in my mind
why do they want to speak to me
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Jaden Knight
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Michael Mcparland 11 November 2014

I appreciate and like that you have no fear of showing your inner most feelings. I always appreciate a poet or any artist that puts it all out with pride and confidence. I've been through these types of dark feelings too so it's something I can connect with. Very good write.

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Alesia Leach 10 November 2014

Appears to have been a very dark time for. Nicely written.

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