Thursday, February 27, 2014

068. When I Was An Elephant Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I was an elephant
I made a football with my trunk
the arm let out a violent sneeze
and so created a ball of cheese
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Bri Edwards 10 March 2016

oops. let me look for one i haven't read. :) bri

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Bri Edwards 15 June 2015

i guess i need to follow Alesia's lead (see below) to try and make sense out of this. BUT, what fun would THAT be? ? ! Profanisaurus, you have many talents in the field of poetry. this kind of poem is one of them. very nice. [and (coincidentally) it really ALL makes sense to ME! ] have a craze as day! what have you been up to? Mary-aka-Bri :) :)

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Alesia Leach 10 November 2014

I read red elephant and then of course I had to read your an elephant and what can I say now it all makes perfect sense.

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