Wednesday, February 26, 2014

064. The Sun Rises At The Start Of Another Day Comments

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The sun rises at the start of another day
bringing fresh blood shed
more deaths to mourn
for people to read about the next day
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Beach Girl 02 March 2014

John, your poems are all very powerful and thought provoking! Enjoyed this line immensely, 'Can no one see the bloodstains on the tattered flag of humanity'. Awesome poem!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 27 February 2014

A hardhitting poem on the sociopolitical situation. Written in awesome rhyme schemes. Pls review my latest poem too.

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