Wednesday, February 26, 2014

062. I Saw Three Birds Comments

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I saw three birds
of colour green
build a house
that can’t be seen
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Jaden Knight
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Bri Edwards 03 October 2015

“cy•an ˈsīˌan, ˈsīən/ noun noun: cyan 1. a greenish-blue color, which is one of the primary subtractive colors, complementary to red “ who knew? it is a blue! ! bri :) - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - A dog to make a bed of straw a horse to suckle two wild boars................. ................. you must have eaten some bad limes, as you 'forgot' to make (here) rhymes! may i suggest: a dog to make a bed of straw a horse to suckle two wild boars in awe.................? OR a dog to make a bed of whores a horse to suckle two wild boars...........? sorry, Profanisaurus, but i THOUGHT i'd already put this or another of your poems into my/our October a showcase for PH poets long ago. but i guess i must have eaten some of the same bad limes! ! ! ! ! ! bri :) i'll get it in ASAP.

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Alesia Leach 10 November 2014

LOL that's a strange zoo you got there.

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