Pale moonlight shines between the stubborn clouds
as I make my way up the cracked stone path
I know where your grave lies
need know no one to show me the way
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i'm pretty sure you made this one up. tell me i'm right! very nice. i don't even miss punctuation or rhymes. i notice the only capital letters are the first letters of each stanza; i like it. i don't recall seeing that done before, but i suppose it has been. thanks for using apostrophes. nice and compact. it goes to MyPoemList. this may be my favorite stanza: our head stone says you died peacefully but I know that’s not the truth a lie to remain uncorrected it’s not how it happened peace was what you looked for thanks for sharing. bri :)
still a great write a year later. and you are 'still kicking', my friend? ! bri :)