Monday, July 23, 2007

(056) A Few Small Wishes Comments

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Dear God please grant me
A few small wishes
I love to eat puddings and
Other tasty dishes
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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)
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Patricia Gale 23 July 2007

Wishes and dreams keeps us young, keep up the fine work...

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Ivan Donn Carswell 23 July 2007

Risha, accepting a good night's sleep in lieu of grandiose wishes is great wisdom - awakening refreshed after repose means most problems somehow magically disappear... Regards, Ivan

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Raynette Eitel 23 July 2007

Risha, this is nicely done...and wishing is what makes children so...well...accepting of the miracles of life. I like your conclusion to this, for reality did finally creep back in. You are a very talented young lady. Raynette

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David Harris 23 July 2007

Risha, do not wish your life away. enjoy each day while you are young, you'll grow up much sooner than you think. Enjoy having fun with all of your friends, because when you reach my age you'll be wishing you were young again. I guess I still am at heart because I go away every other weekend and roll back my childhood playing Cowboys and Indians with a lot of other old youngsters. Wonderful poem. I'm sure god will grant you a good night sleep. Top Marks from me and thanks for sharing it my Princess of Poetry. David

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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