Wednesday, February 26, 2014

053. Tell Me A Story Of Every Thing Comments

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Tell me a story of everything that went right
of all the good things
that were meant to happen
I bet you won’t be able to
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Jaden Knight
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Bri Edwards 14 January 2015

i'm almost positive i've read this before, but i see no comment........ by anyone. could you have deleted comments? yes, that you COULD do, and you are welcome to. it is YOUR poem. and a rather dark one as well. have you been so ill-treated as this poem implies? no need to answer. letting out emotions, or should i say displaying emotions in a poem can be helpful i guess. if indeed you have been harmed by rumors, i hope writing about it has helped you. a black veil seems to shroud this poem. smile! look at the sunlight! have a special snack (but don't forget the exercise to follow!) . time to relinquish this computer to its owner, my boss at home. i was running out of things to say anyways. thanks, Profanisaurus, for sharing. bri :)

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