I watch the sun set behind the trees
giving way to the darkness in the sky
it floods my mind with it's blackness
dragging me inside
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I really like the emotion and depth in this piece. I can't point out just one particular thing I like because it's all encompassing in what I see. Wonderful piece. A true 10 all the way.
Narcisitic sociopathic types have had a similar effect on me - love the artistic strong imagery which takes us into your world. Even though I haven't had experience and find the ending a little too condensed to understand what happened exactly you shared the burn of raw emotion well. Ouch: -)