Wednesday, February 26, 2014

050. I Watch The Sun Set Behind The Trees Comments

Rating: 5.0

I watch the sun set behind the trees
giving way to the darkness in the sky
it floods my mind with it's blackness
dragging me inside
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Jaden Knight
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Michele Hammond 18 December 2014

Narcisitic sociopathic types have had a similar effect on me - love the artistic strong imagery which takes us into your world. Even though I haven't had experience and find the ending a little too condensed to understand what happened exactly you shared the burn of raw emotion well. Ouch: -)

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Michael Mcparland 11 November 2014

I really like the emotion and depth in this piece. I can't point out just one particular thing I like because it's all encompassing in what I see. Wonderful piece. A true 10 all the way.

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Alesia Leach 10 November 2014

A sad poem. Well written.

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