(050) Fate Comments

True, Prem, very true Only those hit by Thunderbolt Know the electifying feeling The shivering sensation But, will they tell! Fate, cruel like a step mother Hates the victory of Love! Leaving us scarred for life Bleeding by the wayside of Life Forever waiting for a single Side long glance from Love Who is wisked away from us By mean, jealous Fate! Angel

Fate! ! ! ? ? ? I am of the opinion that we shall not blame fate for all It is we who stood behold and silent on some others decisons, but not the fate Is it not? ? ? ? sandhya

Nice write good subject to write about.

Fate, Fate, Fate, the freewill' s mate. from small to great all are under it's threat. Good Work

yes fate love and destiny all intertwined nice poem ++10 love anju

Fate led me to your peom and I'm pleased beacause it is worthy of 10, Lynda xx

fate some times plays hard and hurts but in this poem fate has made you write well

a dearly nice piece about fate and love, how it plays and wound the heart...thanks.

that couldn't be a water dream! lines cleverly expressive...good write 10