05 The Sea Comments
Oh just look at the sea!
With waves so high, touching the skies,
Splashing on the sands of the shore.
There are childrens and adults everywhere,
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Athul, pleasant poem, sea the most powerful theme, keep writing
lovely; makes me wanna drown in those words, and shine the sun's light on me!
what lovely poem. i too love the sea, sand and sun.you have painted a picyure of what all sea lovers feel.
Incredible poem Athul...one of my favorites as I too love the sea...you have a way with words that put someone in your experience. An experience of a happy time! Thank you! Cathy
You fantasize the nature very nicely just like I do (Why My Room Can't Be A Garden) you're accomplishing really good.
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7/26/2025 10:04:09 PM # 1.0.0
My dear little Atul, I read your poems. You are really a ray of hope for India poetry.At present u are writing poetry akin to your age and maturity. But with your growing age you must focus on social issues, our country's burning problems etc. That will make you a real poet/great poet. Pl. go through my poems...u will understand me and my advice. It is upto u then. with blessings, sathya narayana