Wednesday, May 28, 2008

(048) Love Comments

Rating: 3.1

My tent,
she stood like
a mountain peak:
an embodiment of
...
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premji premji
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Excellent! Gypsy Life, Desert, Tent... An off-bit subject! ! Well addressed poetically. dr. sakti. 20.07.09.

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Luningning Minguez 26 June 2009

No MattEr HoW StronG Our ShiElds WeRe LovE Is JusT so PowerfuL.. to MakE Us SurrendeR to Our OwN WeaKnesS and PowerfuL to Give us StrenGth! Nice! ! ! Very verY BeutifuL! ! ! ! !

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Pandian Angelina 13 May 2009

Prem, How Proud and Self-Sufficient we were before we became victims of Sly Love who turns us out as nomads into life in search, for a soulmate, for eternity! Your potrayal is beautifu, vivid and use of the Arab tale apt and so well done! Pls read my 'Beggar' when you find time. Angel

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Mamta Agarwal 06 January 2009

Premji, the poem and the images it evokes reverberate in my mind- i have read it several times- pain, agony and the last two lines are heart rending.sense of desolation- you alone can capture in this way.10+++ Mamta

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Little Morning Star 30 November 2008

Great.. our love is our life.. our life is our love..

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Sandra Fowler 30 July 2008

Excellent use of metaphor and imagery. Ten without hesitation. Kind regards, Sandra

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 18 July 2008

A very deep thoughtful poetry depicting the lifes expreiences

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