My tent,
she stood like
a mountain peak:
an embodiment of
...
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No MattEr HoW StronG Our ShiElds WeRe LovE Is JusT so PowerfuL.. to MakE Us SurrendeR to Our OwN WeaKnesS and PowerfuL to Give us StrenGth! Nice! ! ! Very verY BeutifuL! ! ! ! !
Prem, How Proud and Self-Sufficient we were before we became victims of Sly Love who turns us out as nomads into life in search, for a soulmate, for eternity! Your potrayal is beautifu, vivid and use of the Arab tale apt and so well done! Pls read my 'Beggar' when you find time. Angel
Premji, the poem and the images it evokes reverberate in my mind- i have read it several times- pain, agony and the last two lines are heart rending.sense of desolation- you alone can capture in this way.10+++ Mamta
Great.. our love is our life.. our life is our love..
Excellent use of metaphor and imagery. Ten without hesitation. Kind regards, Sandra
A very deep thoughtful poetry depicting the lifes expreiences
Excellent! Gypsy Life, Desert, Tent... An off-bit subject! ! Well addressed poetically. dr. sakti. 20.07.09.