Wednesday, February 26, 2014

048. Flying On A Crocodile Comments

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Flying on a crocodile
through the ears of an elf
I heard a pink giraffe
give birth to its self
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Jaden Knight
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Bri Edwards 18 November 2014

i love nose/rhinos (accent on -nos) . the bee was rather angry that its eyes were in a box.............. this pulls at my mind; i'm liking it. sorry to have to tell you, but this too belongs in MyPoemList! AND...inside the poor elf’s head ....................almost priceless. i wonder how much it would bring in if poems were auctioned at Christie's. i'm going to send this poem to a few friends i think. :) bri thanks for sharing.

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Gergana Teofilova 30 October 2014

Nice but...where is the crocodile after all? lol Keep it up!

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