Wednesday, February 26, 2014

047. I Need Sheep's Feathers To Make A Bed Comments

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I need sheep's feathers to make a bed
I love to eat the air
my nose has gone and fried its self
with green and purple hair
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Jaden Knight
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Bri Edwards 23 May 2015

favorite lines so far: down come a ladder from an oak tree like an ape with yellow arms it swung .............. i can just about picture this. :) the only line i got lost on was this: I saw this on a park side elephant i liked how you continued with a ladder from stanza two to number three, even though for a short while. P, . i believe this has been the most entertaining of your SILLY poems i've read; i think this is the 4th or fifth. i have to read it again! bri :) have a craze as day, my pickled poet.

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Gergana Teofilova 30 October 2014

You really do have a talent for writing such funny stuff, ya know? ;) hehe

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