044. After The Divorce Comments

another Wow poem, and i thought of wow before i read the other comments. really. not that such sentiments haven't received attention by poets before now [and i'm no expert at anyone else's poetry but mine], BUT the treatment, the smoothness, the love? you have given this is [almost] amazing, though i don't know what [really] amazing would look like. to MyPoemList. - - - - - - my favorite stanza: it seems that I have lost my mind I know that I have lost my way trying to find the right path to avoid the rejection I feel inside my heart............... beautiful. i hope you used a topic for PH like love, so love fans will be more likely to see it. but let me take a look at the 'crocodile' poem i saw a little farther down in your poem list. thanks for sharing. bri :)

Knowing that, if this is you. Even after the art of love is call. Vividly. The divorce part has its sight. Yes, don't give up. Silly hurts but remain hopeful for someone.

Wow, , , When I'm reading this I saw again myself and my tears fall down again...The hurt always in my heart even though I forgive him already Like what I said the scar still remain cause my heart belongs to him....