Friday, July 25, 2008

(043) Cloned Hearts Comments

Rating: 3.0

Dear,
Let's be
two cloned hearts,
from the cells of
...
Read full text

premji premji
COMMENTS
Maitreyee Joshi 19 February 2010

the crux of the matter is that prem, yr poem defines love so well.thanks......

0 0 Reply
Mamta Agarwal 03 December 2009

what you seek is beyond human nature, but may your wish and aspiration be fulfilled. YOU SAY A LOT IN A FEW WORDS mAMTA

0 0 Reply
Pandian Angelina 13 June 2009

Cloned and bored In complementing Differences, we find Our pits filled And hills mowed A smoothness Then sets in With a surety To last forever! I may be wong But, the Dead Sea Longs for Jordan To fill and dissolve Her salt, her tears! Leena

0 0 Reply
Tara Chettur 06 April 2009

Dear premji, thanks for your comments...... Precise words...10 + this cloned hearts are for the lovers in heaven it seems............. tara

0 0 Reply
Martine Kolber 25 July 2008

Wow, great feelings and beautifully written; -) Love it; -) take care, Martine

0 0 Reply
Rema Prasanna 25 July 2008

Good philosophy but difficult to practice, for a sword at least you keep a stiletto for safety.... I find poetic beauty in this write. Well expressed 10 Rema

0 0 Reply
Kesav Easwaran 25 July 2008

well...premji, a poem bit different here...sweet sincere and romantic 10

0 0 Reply
C T Heart 25 July 2008

From a lucid sparkling river of love streaming in thy veins of heart...be thy soul a DNA to clone an eternal love... Love, Heart

0 0 Reply
premji premji

premji premji

Nowhere but everywhere
Close
Error Success