When you arrive, ring then knock,
we talk a little and I can feel
you think perhaps you ought to say
how’s the poetry going then
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amid the darkness you've found some beauty, some hope. i like your use of narrative and the stream of possibilities you present. how the poem is self-aware.
Michael, your walks, your talks, your poetry, your postings are perfect and loved by so many of us. This is especially lovely. Raynette
Lovely! Thanks so much for your walk, Michael. Bravo.
Thank you for the last stanza, Michael. Hope lives on as reflected in this quiet but tough poem.