Tuesday, April 25, 2006

0424 Walking Together Comments

Rating: 2.3

When you arrive, ring then knock,
we talk a little and I can feel
you think perhaps you ought to say
how’s the poetry going then
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Michael Shepherd
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Esther Leclerc 26 April 2006

Thank you for the last stanza, Michael. Hope lives on as reflected in this quiet but tough poem.

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amid the darkness you've found some beauty, some hope. i like your use of narrative and the stream of possibilities you present. how the poem is self-aware.

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Raynette Eitel 25 April 2006

Michael, your walks, your talks, your poetry, your postings are perfect and loved by so many of us. This is especially lovely. Raynette

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Lovely! Thanks so much for your walk, Michael. Bravo.

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Michael Shepherd

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